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How to say I love you

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You hate me when I am silent
Love, you say, should be loud
You need me to scream
That you are my dream
Or else, I’m a face in the crowd

You doubt me because I am quiet
I whisper when I should roar
I know you love me
I’ll answer your plea
To prove it is you I adore

The murderer lurks in the shadows
Lethal desires to sate
His gun to your head
My voice fills with dread
“Please, let me suffer that fate”

I offer him my life for yours
This gift unadultered and plain
I hope I can show
That I love you so
By taking this shot to the brain.

“Greater love hath no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends.”
                --John 15:13
And here it is. challeneged me to a poetry competition last weekend.

The theme: Love.

Format: A four stanza poem.

This is my Submission. I hope you all like it! I hope he likes it.

His can be found here: [link]

The will have a poll up where YOU get to vote for the better poem. I'll put up a link to it when it is up. Vote for me!

^_^ Anyhow, my fans, I love you all. Thank you so much for everything you've done for me, by simply getting to know me and reading my work.

...Vote for me!
© 2007 - 2024 Heart-Bound-By-Kyubi
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Chouji-Kun's avatar
i like it its realy good